Chapter Eight (part two)

Travis surprised Ben by nudging him awake before dawn. Groggy, still half-asleep, Ben squinted up at him, disbelieving the sight of him fully dressed, even his Sherpa-lined coat on. In Ben's mind, it had been mere minutes ago that they were naked and breathless and barely hanging onto the lingering euphoria of oral stimulation before … Continue reading Chapter Eight (part two)


Chapter Eight (part one)

Murder, betrayal, mistaken identity, drug addiction: aspects of a complex movie plot, skillfully woven through a tropical tapestry of pineapple fields, sandy beaches, ocean waves, and ancient island burial grounds. By page 62 of the 'Treading Water' screenplay still spread out across his lap, Ben had gained a fairly comprehensive overview of the story structure … Continue reading Chapter Eight (part one)